Good poem. Please change the questionable word to d*** (school, you know).Try a water poem! There are lots of ways to say just what you say here, but metaphorically. I know. I do it all the time!
awww thats really good and like sweet in a ....sad way?. very good bena. try writing a poem without rhyming. i think you would be very good at it.
Good job. This reminds me of something....
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Good poem. Please change the questionable word to d*** (school, you know).
Try a water poem! There are lots of ways to say just what you say here, but metaphorically. I know. I do it all the time!
awww thats really good and like sweet in a ....sad way?. very good bena. try writing a poem without rhyming. i think you would be very good at it.
Good job. This reminds me of something....
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