Wednesday, May 2, 2007

Waiting




I'm sitting here waiting,
waiting for that call.
Wondering if you are even,
going to call at all.
Every time the phone has rang,
I wish and hope it's you.
But each time that I answer,
My wish has not come true.
You told me that you would,
when I told you to call me,
but I have been sitting here for hours.
How hard could calling me be?
The phone hasn't even rung,
and darkness has overtaken the light.
Everyone has gone to sleep,
and today is now tonight.
It is getting really late,
my heart is broken; not elating.
I lay down in bed and start to cry,
and I continue waiting.

5 comments:

LBH said...

I like how this sounds like it's gonna ring, (it being the phone) then it never does. Great job.

Smitty Werbenyegermanjenson said...

I like 'everyone has gone to sleep/and today is now tonight'.... It pretty much rocks majorly...
~Kylie~

AnneleiseCapishe said...

wow, you are a goddess! i love your writing.. i wrote about this same picture, but id have to say i liked your writing better.. i think everyone has been in that situation before... dontchya think ?

Carly Oswald said...

hey i love it you ryme and rythme are great you have mad talent gurl love ya

Anonymous said...

Thanks for writing this.