When we aren't together,
time slowly passes by.
When we aren't together,
I sit alone and cry.
When we aren't together,
I miss you more than anything.
When we aren't together,
It makes my broken heart sting.
When we aren't together,
is when I want you to hold me close.
When we aren't together,
is when I need you most.
6 comments:
You did better than me. I like this one, it is another section of your long line of poems, which are all very moving, based on experience I had with ---.
I love 'When we aren't together/I sit alone and cry' You totally got what I got from the painting and I can see your feelings like right there. It's way awesome.
~K~
I'm sensing a theme in your poetry. That's OK--we all have our favorite topics/obsessions. "I miss you more THAN anything " not "then".
There is a good message! I'm not entirely seeing what it has to do with the drawing, but that may jus tbe me! Keep up the good work!
Gala Gala Gala :]
i love it once again ryme, rythme ,emotion its all great my favorite part is:
" When we aren't together,
is when I want you to hold me close.
When we aren't together,
is when I need you most feelings great" because i can relate to those words
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